(World / Ballad). Got To Live Together

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Dante
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17 Nov 2015

Feedback on technical/musical aspects appreciated but also on conveyance of meaning :


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DeltaHotelVictory
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17 Nov 2015

I really like the vocals, both performance-wise and how it is produced and mixed. Same holds for the guitars. Awesome job on that.

Then, and I hope I am not being too harsh here, the drums and piano stand in quite a sharp contrast with the vox and guitar in my opinion. Both sound kind of "cheesy", especially the drums. I think if you could find drum and piano samples that sound like "live" recordings of real instruments, it would really add to the song and you could have a winner.

I think that the song conveys its meaning well. For my taste, it could be a bit more subtle as the text sounds kind of "obvious", but I will leave that one up to other people as well. There is not accounting for taste, after all.

Again, I think you could have a winner, so well done!

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