Beach at Night - Goa Trance (WIP)

[cr1st0]

Tell me you opinion and tips to improve thanks

[Aggie]

My thoughts:

Nice tune!

0:13 - tune drops completely, here. You might want to leave at least a bit of percussion to keep it moving? It sounds like you unplugged everything!
1:11 loving the progression here - really works fading left/right...
1:50 percussion drop-away worked well...
to 2:40 - gets a bit "samey" to this point, with no progression and nothing really happening... maybe even 8 bars too long?
3:40? didn't work for me...
4:36 - liked the transition... maybe put a full bass drop in here?
5:08-5:12 - sounds like something in the background is trying to come through, but doesn't really transpire? Not really sure...

Thanks for the listen!

aggie

[cr1st0]

Thanks you for analyze.

I wanna do music like this,

[cr1st0]

I have long way until I reach this master piece lolol.

[Aggie]

I think we ALL have a long way to go...

The thing about progression in a long piece is to introduce it either subtly (so that nobody notices the change) - or to drop into it dramatically, so that it is obvious. Perhaps have a listen to the changes across my own work, where you can't usually tell when things have changed that much but, overall, the piece moves from relatively slow and quiet to final crescendo... I know this isn't trance, but you'll get the idea!



Keep trying!

aggie

[cr1st0]

Retouched, and I'm happy with the result