(house-ish) startling speed

[loopzeugflieger]

Hi,

Basically same as my last post but second track im working on.

other person i showed this says its flat and mono sounding.
Do you people have snome constructive critics on it? That would be great.

Its my first steps in mixing and arranging trying to master more or less.
Fiddling with reason for decades but now wanna work on finally finishing some tracks.

https://on.soundcloud.com/77yDu

Best

Chris