Hi
I paused my Larry Fast record to hear this...
Ok so you really do need to take some time as this isn't exactly a pop song. But you very accurately described yourself as Berlin School so anything under 22:30 is admitting you are a wimp LOL
It seems pretty quiet but there may be a more rousing section later. Also most modern mixes (possibly including my own) tend to be too loud. Maybe your mix is a little limited in freq range but that isn't a killer at all as it makes it seem more "period". The mix is lacking some sense of shine or gloss but is definitely nice in character. I notice you only let people hear a mono version of your tracks, maybe that explains.
Ok we have some melodic activity at 8:55 and it is really lovely. I skipped to 13 mins and now we have the obligatory Berlin School riff. Nice.
I'm off to Bandcamp to check out more of your work.