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The Shoot is Stronger Than the Stone (alt rock)
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- crimsonwarlock
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Soundwise there's nothing to fault. The mix sounds fine. However, the composition and arrangement are lacking in variation. I definitely heard better from you.
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hey, thanks for listening, and the feedback! anything in particular with the comp/arrangement that you're not caring for? (too repetitive, something you're not liking with the structure, instrumentation, etc.)crimsonwarlock wrote: ↑24 Dec 2023Soundwise there's nothing to fault. The mix sounds fine. However, the composition and arrangement are lacking in variation. I definitely heard better from you.
- crimsonwarlock
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It sounds rather repetitive to me. A large part of the track is basically the same chord and the same strumming pattern. I do like most of your tracks, but this one just isn't up there with the rest for me.
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Analog tape ⇒ ESQ1 sequencer board ⇒ Atari/Steinberg Pro24 ⇒ Atari/Cubase ⇒ Cakewalk Sonar ⇒ Orion Pro/Platinum ⇒ Reaper ⇒ Reason DAW.
Analog tape ⇒ ESQ1 sequencer board ⇒ Atari/Steinberg Pro24 ⇒ Atari/Cubase ⇒ Cakewalk Sonar ⇒ Orion Pro/Platinum ⇒ Reaper ⇒ Reason DAW.
thanks for expanding. I can definitely see how it might be a bit repetitive. had some trouble with this one, but thought I’d managed to get it sorted out. in retrospect, I probably should have tabled it for a while and come back to it with fresh ears. appreciate it!crimsonwarlock wrote: ↑24 Dec 2023It sounds rather repetitive to me. A large part of the track is basically the same chord and the same strumming pattern. I do like most of your tracks, but this one just isn't up there with the rest for me.
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